Give a real-life example where handling imbalanced data is crucial.

2026-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Wela

학생이 쓴 원문

The most common case where handling imbalance of dataset is health care system, especially cancer diagnosis. For example, there are only few people who have the cancer within the entire poplulation. Assume that this proportion is only 2 percent. If we train a deep learning model with this dataset, this model might be focus on learn the feature of last 98 percent (normal case). And this model finally can\'t detect the cancer and it loss its use. So if you want to train your model more accurate, you have to use some balancing methods such as oversampling.

강사 첨삭

You clearly understand the concept of imbalanced datasets, especially in real-world applications like healthcare. I’m impressed that you used a specific percentage example (2%) to explain the problem, that shows analytical thinking. Your explanation of how a model might focus too much on the majority class was logically structured and easy to follow. That’s a strong point in academic writing.

-Teacher Wela 

The most common case where handling imbalance of dataset is health care system, especially cancer diagnosis.

>> The most common case where handling an imbalanced dataset is crucial is in the healthcare system, especially in cancer diagnosis.

For example, there are only few people who have the cancer within the entire poplulation.

>> For example, there are only a few people who have cancer within the entire population.

If we train a deep learning model with this dataset, this model might be focus on learn the feature of last 98 percent (normal case).

>> If we train a deep learning model with this dataset, the model might focus on learning the features of the remaining 98 percent (normal cases).

And this model finally can\'t detect the cancer and it loss its use.

>> As a result, the model cannot detect cancer and loses its usefulness.

So if you want to train your model more accurate, you have to use some balancing methods such as oversampling.

>> So, if you want to train your model to be more accurate, you have to use balancing methods such as oversampling.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·