Give and take

2020-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

For me, \"Give and Take\" means respect to each other. When somebody shows his/her appreciation by giving something, I think it is kind of interaction. For good interaction, it is necessary to express their thinking if they want to keep their relationship in a good way. Thus, whenever my friends treat dinner for me or something like that, I always try to reward for that.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jay!
I included the common expressions in the situations you have given.
I hope you can familiarize yourself with them and apply them in the future.
This is a quality composition.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
For me, \"Give and Take\" means respect to each other. 
>> For me, \"Give and Take\" means respect for each other. 
When somebody shows his/her appreciation by giving something, I think it is kind of interaction. 
>> When somebody shows his/her appreciation by giving something, I think it is kind of an interaction. 
For good interaction, it is necessary to express their thinking if they want to keep their relationship in a good way. 
>> For good interaction, it is necessary to express their thoughts if they want to keep their relationship in a good way. 
Thus, whenever my friends treat dinner for me or something like that, I always try to reward for that.
>> Thus, whenever my friends treat me to dinner or something like that, I always try to find a way to pay them back. 

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