Give feedback or answer the question of our boss
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a very crucial activity because the boss can decide the company-wise goals
and appreciate the matters of company in advance.
I know that the boss needs a lot of information and conclusion from the clients
and related companies to achieve the profits of company. Especially, it is a good
chance to escape a risk of the management and an uncleared economy situation
around the world.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
This is a great improvement on writing your essay! A few sentences can contain so powerful ideas just like what you have written here below. Critical decisions are made by the boss, thus, we need to cooperate to make work and tasks faster for him/her to that.
This is a very good answer. Keep up the good work and see you in class soon!
-T. Donna =)
and appreciate the matters of company in advance.
>> Correct!
I know that the boss needs a lot of information and conclusion from the clients
and related companies to achieve the profits of company.
I know that the boss needs a lot of information and conclusion from the clients
and related companies to achieve the profits of company.
>> Correct!
Or: I know that the boss needs a lot of information and conclusion from the clients
and related companies to achieve the profits of the company. Especially, it is a good
chance to escape a risk of the management and an uncleared economy situation
around the world.
chance to escape a risk of the management and an uncleared economy situation
around the world.
>> Correct!
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