Give me a tip to get a job in other country.

Today, I was on holiday. As i said night before, i spend my free time making a plan and dreaming my blueprint. Doing internet web surfing about my plan, I found the difficulies of getting a job in Austrailia. There were differences between people who have experienced that program that i really hope. Some people said job oppourtunities are very tight and ristricted not in Auistraila, so traveler must contact to Agency to get a job by paying lots of money. However, the others said we should experience everything by oneself wihtout help from getting a shelter to job. Additionally, they said that these individual tasks would be a treasure for ourselves in future. Sometimes, I have seen many overseas workers in my country. Most of them seemed to be from relative poor countries. A month later, I would be a one of the overseas that i have seen. Alice, I hope you can help me. I am plant to write my cover letter before departure. Then, could i write the content in advance in korean? this blank

Hi [이름]! You are such an organized person to always making sure to plan all the things you should in one month\'s time. I appreciate you trusting me in relation to your journeyto finding a job. A cover letter should actually be specific to the position you are applying for, relating your skills and experience to those noted in the job posting. Your cover letter is your first (and best) chance to make a good impression. :) Now I want you to make your cover letter written in English (\'cause I guess, you will be applying in Australia where all companies require English cover letters.) Then I will help you out with your output. I will just correct grammar errors and add some important details if possible. I will be very much pleasured to help you with this, okay? :) Talk to you later then. :) ~ Teacher Alice Today, I was on holiday. >> BETTER: Today, I was on day off. *Holiday refers to a day fixed by law or custom on which ordinary business is suspended in commemoration of some event or in honor of some person. As i said night before, i spend my free time making a plan and dreaming my blueprint. >> As I said the other night, I spent my free time making a plan and thinking of my blueprint. Doing internet web surfing about my plan, I found the difficulies of getting a job in Austrailia. >> While surfing the internet to make my plan, I have found the difficulties of getting a job in Australia. There were differences between people who have experienced that program that i really hope. >> There are differences among the people who have experienced that program that I am looking forward to. Some people said job oppourtunities are very tight and ristricted not in Auistraila, so traveler must contact to Agency to get a job by paying lots of money. >> Some people said job opportunities are very tight and ristricted in Austraila, so travelers must contact to the agency to get a job by paying lots of money. *Ooooh. Hard time. However, the others said we should experience everything by oneself wihtout help from getting a shelter to job. >> However, the others said we should experience everything by oneself without the asking any help from getting a shelter to finding job. Additionally, they said that these individual tasks would be a treasure for ourselves in future. >> Additionally, they said that these individual tasks would be a treasure for ourselves in the future. >> OR: Moreover, they said that these individual tasks would be a treasure for ourselves in the future. Sometimes, I have seen many overseas workers in my country. >> Sometimes, I see many overseas workers in my country. >> OR: Some time before, I have seen many overseas workers in my country. *If you mean you\'ve seen them in the past. Most of them seemed to be from relative poor countries. >> Correct! A month later, I would be a one of the overseas that i have seen. >> A month later, I would be one of the overseas workers that I have seen.Alice, I hope you can help me. >> Correct! I am plant to write my cover letter before departure. >> I plan to write my cover letter before my departure. Then, could i write the content in advance in korean? >> Then, could I write the content in Korean in advance?