Give me corrections please^^

2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

I will tell how to play a game that i made. Please give me the corrections if it is weird. 1. This is a pair game. 2. We will use the cards of appendix page 33. 3. Place the cards face down on the desk. 4. When I tell you \"Do you know anything about 00?\", choose one of the cards and flip it over. 5. If the card is right, just leave it. If not, flip it again. 6. And if you flipped the card right, you can continue to do it but if you not, it will be your partner\'s turn. 7. The student who flips all the cards over will be the winner.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Please check the corrections below. Some of your sentences are correct, so good job! ^^

By the way, what game is this? ^^

1. This is a pair game.

>> CORRECT

OR >> This is a game played by two people.
 2. We will use the cards of appendix page 33.

>> We will use the cards from Appendix page 33.
 3. Place the cards face down on the desk.

>> Place down the cards on the desk.
 4. When I tell you \"Do you know anything about 00?\", choose one of the cards and flip it over.

>> When I ask you \"Do you know anything about 00?\", pick up one card and flip it over.
 5. If the card is right, just leave it. If not, flip it again.

>> CORRECT
 6. And if you flipped the card right, you can continue to do it but if you not, it will be your partner\'s turn.

>> Continue flipping if you got the correct card. If not, it will be your partner\'s turn.
 7. The student who flips all the cards over will be the winner.

>> CORRECT


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