Give me one big mistake that you have done and what lesson have you learned from it.

2022-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

At that time, my teacher told me to tell my friend informations about a test. So, I answered, \"Sure.\" However, I forgot to talk my friend them unfortunately. So, I said, \"I\'m so sorry.\" Fortunately, my teacher noticed her it with a paper. So, I could feel easy. / From it, I learned that taking notes is very important. So, I\'m trying to take notes now. However, It is not easy as I expected. I know through making any mistake, I can learn about something, but I don\'t like make any mistake.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kimberly!

Yes, taking notes can really help you a lot when it comes to school or work. :) It\'s good to make it a habit. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

At that time, my teacher told me to tell my friend informations about a test.
>> At that time, my teacher told me to tell my friend information about a test.

 So, I answered, \"Sure.\" 
>> I agreed to her request. 

However, I forgot to talk my friend them unfortunately. 
>>However, I forgot to tell my friend about it eventually. 

So, I said, \"I\'m so sorry.\"
>> I felt sorry for it. 

Fortunately, my teacher noticed her it with a paper.
>> Fortunately, my teacher noticed her holding a paper. 

So, I could feel easy. / 
>> It gave me relief. 

From it, I learned that taking notes is very important. 
>> I learned that it is important to take down notes. 

So, I\'m trying to take notes now.
>> That is why I try my best to do so now. 

However, It is not easy as I expected. 
>> However, it is not easy as I expected. 

I know through making any mistake, I can learn about something, but I don\'t like make any mistake.
>> I know through making mistakes, I can learn about something, but I still don\'t like making mistakes. 

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