Give me one big mistake that you have done and what lesson have you learned from it.
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When I was at 10 years old, I stole money from my grandmother\'s wallet. so my parents took off my clothes and threw me out in the middle of winter. Fortunately, no one saw it because it was an apartment. I learned it\'s hard to make money. :)
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Hi Elic!
Oh dear! I was shocked when I was reading your answer. That experience is eye-opening. Hahaha!
When I was at 10 years old, I stole money from my grandmother\'s wallet.
>> CORRECT
so my parents took off my clothes and threw me out in the middle of winter.
>>So my parents took off my clothes and threw me out in the middle of winter.
Fortunately, no one saw it because it was an apartment.
>> CORRECT
I learned it\'s hard to make money. :)
>> I learned it\'s hard to earn money. :)
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