Give me one big mistake that you have done and what lesson have you learned from it.
학생이 쓴 원문
One of my biggest mistakes is I opened the car\'s door in the running car.
It was a mistake but It was able to be a very big accident.
But Fortunately, I closed the car\'s door, and there was no any accident.
But I got shocked after it, and I learned that I have to be careful in the car.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Oh dear. You should be very careful. Good thing nothing bad happened to you. That sounded scary.
One of my biggest mistakes is I opened the car\'s door in the running car.
It was a mistake but It was able to be a very big accident.
But Fortunately, I closed the car\'s door, and there was no any accident.
But I got shocked after it, and I learned that I have to be careful in the car.
>> One of my biggest mistakes is I opened the car\'s door while it was running.
It was a mistake but It was able to be a very big accident.
>> It was a mistake and I was supposed to be in a very big accident.
But Fortunately, I closed the car\'s door, and there was no any accident.
>> But fortunately I closed it immediately.
But I got shocked after it, and I learned that I have to be careful in the car.
>> I was so shocked after it and I learned that I should be careful when I am in car.
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