Give me one festival in your hometown that you enjoy the most.

2021-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I like festval is Seoul rose festival. Because i like roses. You can see roses in here and take pictures.

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That sounds like a fun festival! Festivals are really great. People gather together to celebrate and have a good time. Hopefully, this virus would be gone so that we can go back to enjoying it again.

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I like festval is Seoul rose festival.

>> I like the Rose festival in Seoul because I like roses.

Because i like roses.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

You can see roses in here and take pictures.
>> You can see a lot of roses and take pictures of them.

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