Give some examples of healthy and unhealthy snacks. When do you usually have snacks?
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There are some healthy snacks(e.q cereal bars,nuts,Gimbap ) unhealthy snacks (e.q Ramyoen, Hamburger,French fry,Pizza,).
I usually don\'t like having snacks. But when I feel tired,have no appetite , I have snacks.
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There are some healthy snacks (e.q cereal bars,nuts,Gimbap ) unhealthy snacks (e.q Ramyoen, Hamburger,French fry,Pizza,).
>> There are some healthy snacks (e.g. cereal bars, nuts, Gimbap ) and unhealthy snacks (e.g. Ramyeon, Hamburger,French fries,Pizza).
I usually don\'t like having snacks.
I usually don\'t like having snacks.
>> Correct
But when I feel tired,have no appetite , I have snacks.
>> However, when I feel tired and have no appetite, I have snacks.
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