give up
학생이 쓴 원문
One of professors in my undergraduate school said, "The greatest success in my life is not to give up." I agree. Failures only exsist to people who give up what they want. So what I want to say is that I never give up because I have a dream.
I will dream until I will grab my death. The death is coming every moment. But I'm not afraid. If I will be dead earlier than what I think, I won't regret. Because I'll have lived hardest in my life.
Anyway I will be live forever and ever. :)
I sometimes give up something that I can't do it in my life. But I will give away my life. I give up what I have to give it up. I will never give up.
1.a
2.a
3.b
4.b
5.c
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One of professors in my undergraduate school said, \"The greatest success in my life is not to give up.\"
>> One of my professors in my undergraduate school said, \"The greatest success in my life is not to give up.\"
I agree.
>> Correct!
Failures only exsist to people who give up what they want.
>> Correct!
So what I want to say is that I never give up because I have a dream.
>> Correct!I will dream until I will grab my death.
>> I will keep on dreaming until my last breath.
The death is coming every moment.
>> Death is coming any moment.
But I\'m not afraid.
>> Correct!
If I will be dead earlier than what I think, I won\'t regret.
>> If I will die eralier that what I expected, I won\'t regret anything.
Because I\'ll have lived hardest in my life.
>> Because I lived my life fruitfully.Anyway I will be live forever and ever. :)>> Anyway, I will live forever and ever.I sometimes give up something that I can\'t do in my life.
>> Correct!
But I will give away my life.
>> Correct!
I give up what I have to give it up.
>> Correct!
I will never give up.>> Correct!1.a
>> Correct!2.a
>> b.3.b
>> Correct!4.b
>> Correct!5.c
>> Correct!
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