Given a chance, to redo 2020, how would you like it to be?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I will come back to Korea. And before corona gets worse, I will visit any country...
And also I will study more hard on my subjects.
I won\'t waste any time either :D
I will also read lots of books to improve UwU
And I will tell my mum to do Power English first, because it helped me a lot... :-)
Thank you...!
:D
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you.
Keep up the good work!
Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)
Given a chance, to redo 2020, how would you like it to be?
First, I will come back to Korea. And before corona gets worse, I will visit any country...
>>> First, I will come back to South Korea and before coronavirus becomes worse, I will visit any country.
And also I will study more hard on my subjects.
>>> Second, I will study all my subjects harder.
I won\'t waste any time either :D
>>> Third, I won\'t waste any time either.
I will also read lots of books to improve UwU
>>> I will also read lots of books to improve.
OR: I will read a lot of books so that I\'ll improve in reading and comprehension.
And I will tell my mum to do Power English first, because it helped me a lot.
>>> Lastly, I will tell my mom to study in Power English earlier, because it helped me a lot.
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