Given a chance will you have your own mukbang channel? Why?
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I would like to have my own mukbang channel on youtube. Because mukbang contents are still very popular in my country, so I guess I can earn money from this channel. Moreover, I am very good at eating :) and also enjoy to make a video of myself.
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Given a chance will you have your own mukbang channel? Why?
I would like to have my own mukbang channel on youtube.
>>> I would like to have my own mukbang channel on YouTube.
Because mukbang contents are still very popular in my country, so I guess I can earn money from this channel.
>>> Mukbang videos are still very popular in my country, so I guess I can earn a lot of money from this channel if I make my own.
Moreover, I am very good at eating :) and also enjoy to make a video of myself.
>>> Moreover, I am very good at eating and I also enjoy making a video filming myself.
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