Given a chance, will you rescue every one having the Coronavirus?
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Even if I had a chance to rescue people having the Coronavirus, it would be absolutely difficult to save all of them. Because, we don’t know what it is from or when it starts exactly still now. Also, I am not a person who have influential power in the world. Therefore, even if I insist strongly to the people preparing the Coronavirus, I think nobody would listen my word. So, instead of this, I would buy more masks and hand sanitizer for my family.
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Given a chance, will you rescue every one having the Coronavirus?
Even if I had a chance to rescue people having the Coronavirus, it would be absolutely difficult to save all of them.
>>> Even if I had a chance to rescue people having the Coronavirus, it would absolutely be difficult to save all of them.
Because, we don’t know what it is from or when it starts exactly still now.
>>> Because we don’t know where is it from or when did it exactly started up until now.
Also, I am not a person who have influential power in the world.
>>> Also, I am not a person who has great influence or power in the world.
Therefore, even if I insist strongly to the people preparing the Coronavirus, I think nobody would listen my word.
>>> Therefore, even if I strongly insist on the people to prepare for the Coronavirus, I think nobody would listen to my word.
So, instead of this, I would buy more masks and hand sanitizer for my family.
>>> So instead, I would buy more masks and hand sanitizer for my family.
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