Giving a life-changing advice to someone.
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I haven\'t given a life-changing advice to someone. I have heard lots of times, there is no advice good to listen. And when I don\'t know what is correct giving advice or not, not to give a advice is correct. If elder people give advice to young people, young people call to the elder people \"Kon-dae\". Kon-dae means a person who has authoritative mind. We have been living in different generation. Situations that I had experienced never happen when young people are the same age as me. When I advise to someone I should understand them 100 percent. It is so difficult. When I was younger than now. I had experienced giving advice to someone, It wasn\'t good advice. No, It wasn\'t advice. It was order. I wanted him to follow my order. The conclusion is that I am not a good adviser.
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I haven\'t given a life-changing advice to someone.
>> I haven\'t given life-changing advice to someone.
I have heard lots of times, there is no advice good to listen.
>> I have heard a lot of times that there is no good advice to listen to.
And when I don\'t know what is correct giving advice or not, not to give a advice is correct.
>> And when I don\'t know if I am to give advice or not, I think that not saying anything is much better.
If elder people give advice to young people, young people call to the elder people \"Kon-dae\".
>> If elder people give advice to young people, young people call them, \"Kon-dae\".
Kon-dae means a person who has authoritative mind. We have been living in different generation.
>> \"Kon-dae, \" means a person who has an authoritative mind. We have been living in different generations.
Situations that I had experienced never happen when young people are the same age as me.
>> The situations that I had experienced never happened during my younger days.
When I advise to someone I should understand them 100 percent.
>> When I advise someone I should understand them 100 percent.
It is so difficult.
>> Correct.
When I was younger than now. I had experienced giving advice to someone, It wasn\'t good advice.
>> When I was younger, I had experienced giving advice to someone, unfortunately, it wasn\'t a piece of good advice.
No, It wasn\'t advice. It was order.
>> No, It wasn\'t a piece of advice. It was an order.
I wanted him to follow my order.
>> Correct.
The conclusion is that I am not a good adviser.
>>Correct.
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