Giving Instructions: Tell what to do in an earthquake.
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Hi, [이름]!
I do agree with you.
I think we were taught about earthquake drills when we were young.
It is actually helpful until now.
Have a nice day!
_Teacher Dianne
I experienced earthquakes in my hometown when I was young.
>> correct
At that time, the first thing I did was crawl under a desk with a blanket inside.
>> At that time, the first thing I did was crawl under a desk with a blanket covering me.
It is important to cover your head in the event of an earthquake, because all things could fall off by vibration so we could hurt.
>> It is important to cover your head in the event of an earthquake, because all things could fall off by vibration so we could be hurt.
After the end of vibration, we should evacuate to a safe place where wide and flat in a hurry.
>> After the end of the vibration or shaking, we should evacuate to a safe place where it is wide and flat in a hurry.
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