glad to see you again!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Lei! I am very happy to talk with you again and through/on the screen. I was really flattered to be told that you were mesmerized when you saw me by you! You looked so beautiful, intelligent and smart as I expected. So does my husband.
The fragrance of gardenias filled in my garden, which name I couldn’t tell you the last week.
Balloon flowers are bloomed but their thin and long stems are bended due to the heavy rain.
I have to go to walk along the beach right now. See you wednsday!
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]!
Thank you so much for the compliment. I really was mesmerized when I saw you the first time. As I said earlier you look like one of the famous actress here in the Philippines. You look beautiful, sophisticated and a woman of knowledge. Even my co teachers told me so. You have a very good composition here. You're sentences are great. Keep it up Ms. [Name]. Have a great day!! Until our next class.
Lei :-)
Hi, Lei! I am very happy to talk with you again and through/on the screen.
>>Hi, Lei! I am very happy to talk with you again and see you through Skype.
I was really flattered to be told that you were mesmerized when you saw me!
>>correct
You looked so beautiful, intelligent and smart as I expected.
>>correct
So does my husband.
>>correctThe fragrance of gardenias filled in my garden, which name I couldn't tell you the last week.
>>correctBalloon flowers are bloomed but their thin and long stems are bended due to the heavy rain.
>>correctI have to go to walk along the beach right now.
>>correct
See you Wednesday!
>>correct (But you will have a class tomorrow^^, see you then~)
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