glasses shop
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A few years ago, some people predict that glasses shop will disappear as soon as with developing of ophthalmic surgeries like lens surgery.
But surprisingly the prediction was wrong.
More people needed more diverse and different shapes of glasses.
Now glasses is representative item to some people as symbol of individuality.
My husband has 6~7 glasses for different purpose.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]!
I think that people wearing glasses would decline due to advanced medical technologies. However, it is the opposite of what we were expecting. WIth the creation of new techniques of not letting a person use glasses, still, many people wanted to do it the traditional way.
See you in class.
Aki~
A few years ago, some people predict that glasses shop will disappear as soon as with developing of ophthalmic surgeries like lens surgery.
>>> A few years ago, some people predicted that the glasses shop would disappear as soon as ophthalmic surgeries like lens surgery developed.
But surprisingly the prediction was wrong.
>>> But surprisingly, the prediction was incorrect.
More people needed more diverse and different shapes of glasses.
>>> More people need more varied and different shapes of glasses.
Now glasses is representative item to some people as symbol of individuality.
>>> Now glasses are a representative item to some people as a symbol of individuality.
My husband has 6~7 glasses for different purpose.
>>> My husband has 6~7 glasses with different purposes.
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