Global warming

2020-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Do you think global warming is real? Why or why not? Global warming is definitely real. It is worsening every year. Diverse natural disasters like flood, typhen, drought and etc. happen all over the world. In korean, temperture is 10 degree high than 10 years ago in summer. 10 years ago, there was completely fall and spring but it is not. After winter, summor comes right. In summer, sometimes there is drought and sometimes is flood. We cann\'t predict weather. Iceberg of North pole is melted and many animals have gone. It is terrible and horrible. I am very scared ot that

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [Name]!
I very much agree with you Ms. [Name]. If I were to be still alive in 2050\'s prediction, I guess it\'ll be terrible. They say that there will be shortage of water at that time. OMG. I guess water will be precious as gold. :(
~Lucy

Global warming is definitely real.
>>CORRECT!
 It is worsening every year.
>>CORRECT!
Diverse natural disasters like flood, typhen, drought and etc. happen all over the world.
>>Diverse natural disasters like flood, typhoon, drought and etc. happen all over the world.
In korean, temperture is 10 degree high than 10 years ago in summer.
>>In Korea, temperature is 10 degrees, it\'s higher comparing in summer 10 years ago.
10 years ago, there was completely fall and spring but it is not.
>>CORRECT!
After winter, summor comes right. 
>>After winter, summer comes, right?
In summer, sometimes there is drought and sometimes is flood. 
>>In summer, sometimes there is drought and sometimes flood. 
We cann\'t predict weather. 
>>We can\'t predict weather. 
Iceberg of North pole is melted and many animals have gone.
>>CORRECT!
It is terrible and horrible.
>>CORRECT!
 I am very scared ot that.
>> I am very scared of that.

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