Global warming

Some people might say that global warming happens but it is going slow enough to ignore it when they see a lot of snow in winter. However, global warming is getting serious and we definately need to be aware of it. I've never experienced this kind of weather in my own contury, South Korea. During this summer, we had a lot of rain and according to statistics of weather, this year has had the highest record of the amount of rain since it started to monitor weather. However, we tend to take it less serious than how it is in real. For example, we don't very make an effort in order to reduce emitting CO2 or making trash. Now, it is the time we need to take an action.

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I agree with what you’ve said, it’s about time to be mindful in what is happening in our environment  since it is the place we live in.

NicoleJ

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Some people might say that global warming happens but it is going slow enough to ignore it when they see a lot of snow in winter.

>> Some people might say that global warming is happening but it is going slow enough to ignore it when they see a lot of snow in winter.

However, global warming is getting serious and we definately need to be aware of it.

>> Correct

I've never experienced this kind of weather in my own contury, South Korea.

>> Correct

During this summer, we had a lot of rain and according to statistics of weather, this year has had the highest record of the amount of rain since it started to monitor weather.

>> Correct.

However, we tend to take it less serious than how it is in real. For example, we don't very make an effort in order to reduce emitting CO2 or making trash.

>> Correct  

Now, it is the time we need to take an action.

>> Correct