globalization is a phenomenon in which people from many countries are integrated into one culture.
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I didn\'t quite understand the saying that globalization has improved people\'s lives.
>>I don\'t quite understand the saying that globalization has improved people\'s lives.
I think globalization is a phenomenon in which people from many countries are integrated into one culture.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I believe that globalization is a process where individuals from various countries become integrated into a shared culture.
I don\'t feel bad about it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I don\'t feel upset about it.
But I think it would be best to coexist with the culture of the country.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However, I believe it\'s ideal to peacefully coexist with the culture of the country.
Because if I don\'t know my old culture and insist on a new culture, I think all the characteristics of our country will disappear and change like the countries of that culture.
>>Because if I abandon my old culture and solely adopt a new one, I believe the distinctive characteristics of our country might disappear, transforming it to be more like countries in that adopted culture.
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