gloomy friday

2010-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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Actually I have to leave my office this time.I almost spend my all day in my office. I work about 66 hours in a week. wow~ I am surprisig~ because I didn't account the time before. It's too long time. usually I depart from home at 6:20 in the morning and I back home at 9:10. my boss lets me go home at 6 pm every wednesday and friday. but every wednesday I have to prepare the board meeting and wait for the meeting to finish. so I almost can't back home on time every wednesday and also in friday .

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Well, I am so sad to hear that you are having a gloomy Friday. But be strong and just think positively. You can do it. AJA!!   Actually I have to leave my office this time. >>Actually, I am about to leave my office now. I almost spent my whole day in my office. >>I almost spent the whole day in my office. I work about 66 hours in a week. >>CORRECT Wow~ I am surprisig~ because I didn't account the time before. >>Wow! I am surprised because I didn’t count the time before. It's too long time. >>It’s been a long time. Usually I depart from home at 6:20 in the morning and I back home at 9:10. >>Usually I depart from home at 6:20 in the morning and I go home at 9:10. My boss lets me go home at 6 pm every wednesday and friday. >>CORRECT But every Wednesday I have to prepare the board meeting and wait for the meeting to finish. >>But every Wednesday I have to prepare for their board meeting and wait for them to finish. So I almost can't back home on time every wednesday and also in friday. >>So I almost can't go home on time during Wednesdays and Fridays.   Anyways, you submitted a good composition, though try to familiarize yourself with the proper usage of preposition as well as with your subject verb agreement. Please do continue writing. Have fun!..:):) >>Teacher Lei    

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