GMO Food
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Hi, [이름]-Li! :)
Thank you very much for putting some effort into answering our essay question.
I agree that GMO food are not healthy.
Researches have mentioned that they could cause mutation which may lead to cancer.
Anyhow, please stay health and continue practicing writing. ^^
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Charry
>> I disagree on eating GMO food.
OR >> I am against consuming GMO food.
first, we are apart of nature, so I think it\'s most desirable to live by nature\'s providence.
>> First, we are apart of nature so I think, it\'s most desirable to live by nature\'s providence.
GMO foods are very dangerous because if we eat them, some parts of our bodies are also likely to be altered, and we don\'t know any side effects.
>> GMO food are very dangerous because if we eat them, some parts of our bodies are also likely to be altered and we don\'t know of any side effects from it.
and some researchers said, GMO foods performed babies cause childbirth.
>> [Do you mean]: In addition, some researchers said GMO food given to pregnant women caused early childbirth.
one of the solution is when we are going to eat some foods, we shouldn\'t leave food behind and waste food.
>> One of the solutions to end hunger is to avoid leaving food behind and wasting food when we are eating.
if we do that, It could be much better than now.
>> If we do that, it could be much better than now.
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