Go back and live
학생이 쓴 원문
It is very difficult to choose a period of history to live because I think we are spending happiest time of our country.
Of course I want to go back to the life before covid19.
Except the terrible virus, our technology and economy is developed a lot, so we are having a very convenient life.
If I have to choose a moment, I would choose the period of Unified Silla. It is because the period was enriched and peaceful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]ny!
You definitely have to talk about this period more.
I love your positive outlook during these times.
Let\'s discuss more in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It is very difficult to choose a period of history to live because I think we are spending happiest time of our country.
>> It is very difficult to choose a period of history to live in because I think we are spending the happiest time in our country.
Of course I want to go back to the life before covid19.
Of course I want to go back to the life before covid19.
>> Correct
Except the terrible virus, our technology and economy is developed a lot, so we are having a very convenient life.
Except the terrible virus, our technology and economy is developed a lot, so we are having a very convenient life.
>> Except for the terrible virus, our technology and economy have developed a lot, so we are having a very convenient life.
If I have to choose a moment, I would choose the period of Unified Silla.
If I have to choose a moment, I would choose the period of Unified Silla.
>> Correct
It is because the period was enriched and peaceful.
>> It is because the period was enriching and peaceful.
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