Go Camping to Cheongsim

2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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At school,I will go to Cheongsim camping on next Wednesday.Next week I just go to school on Monday.Because Tuesday is holiday and 3days I will go camping.I have to give a phone to teacher.So,I can't play any games. But no class and outdoor activity is fun.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Wow! You\'re going to have fun again!

I know this kind of activity excites you. ^^

Well, just enjoy and have fun with your friends and classmates.

Tell me some stories about your camping.

I will see again the week after next week. :(

Take care always!


_Teacher Dianne


At school,I will go to Cheongsim camping on next Wednesday.

>> I will go to Cheongsim for our school camping next Wednesday.

Next week I just go to school on Monday.

>> Next week, I will only go or study in school on Monday.

Because Tuesday is holiday and 3days I will go camping.

>> It\'s because on Tuesday, it\'s our holiday and I will go on a camping for 3 days.

I have to give a phone to teacher.So,I can\'t play any games.

>> I have to give my phone to our teacher so I can\'t play any games.
 But no class and outdoor activity is fun.

>> But having no class and outdoor activity is fun.

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