Go skiing with high school friends

2010-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I'm going to go skiing with my high school friends in Dec. 28th. I might be last chance to spend time with them as a high school student. Actually I'm not good at ski. But staying with them all they playing games, drinking etc. will be great. However, bus to ski resort depart at 6:30 in the morning and before that day, I have to go to University regular meeting so I have to drink all day. Problem is my physical stamina becase of alcohol and skiing. It is really extreme schedule. I will be exausted and sleep all day in last day in Dec. 29th.

강사 첨삭

HI THERE AGAIN MR. [이름]. NICE TO HAVE AN ACTIVITY WITH YOUR FRIENDS RIGHT?? I HOPE YOU뭃E GOING TO ENJOY YOUR SKIING SPREE!! DON뭈 DRINK TOO MUCH SO YOU CAN ENJOY THE ACTIVITY.


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I'm going to go skiing with my high school friends in Dec. 28th. I might be last chance to spend

>> I뭢 going skiing with my high school friends on December 28th. It might be last chance to spend the time with them.

time with them as a high school student. Actually I'm not good at ski. But staying with them all

>> Honestly, I뭢 not good at skiing; but, staying with them all and playing all sort of games,

they playing games, drinking etc. will be great. However, bus to ski resort depart at 6:30 in the

>> drinking, etc., will be great. However, the bus going to the skiing resort departs at 6:30. morning and before that day, I have to go to University regular meeting so I have to drink all day.

>>Before that day, I have to go to the University for the regular meeting and I want to drink all day.

Problem is my physical stamina becase of alcohol and skiing. It is really extreme schedule.

>> The problem now is poor stamina because of alcohol and I want to enjoy skiing. It뭩 going to be

 a hectic schedule.

I will be exausted and sleep all day in last day in Dec. 29th.

>> I will be exhausted and I뭢 going to sleep all day on our last day December 29th.


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