Go surfing

2012-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I had a pleasant experience the other day. My friends suggested going surfing in the afternoon, but I couldn't go with them because I had to finish the history paper. Although I felt frstrated, I began to work right away at 4 p.m. It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about friends at the beach.Still, I contined to work and I finally finished at 2 in the morning. I was tired, but very satisfied with myself for getting it done.But when I arrived at the class, I saw a sign on the door saying the class was cancelled for personal reasons. I was so happy about it and decided to go enjoy surfing with my friends.

강사 첨삭

  Hello Sophia, Thanky ou for making a composition. I really appreciate it. So, how was surfing. Its good that you had some time off to enjoy your weekend. See you tomorrow! Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: I had a pleasant experience the other day. >>Correct! My friends suggested going surfing in the afternoon, but I couldn\'t go with them because I had to finish the history paper. >>Correct! Although I felt frstrated, I began to work right away at 4 p.m. >>I felt frustrated so I began to work right away at 4 PM. It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about friends at the beach. >> It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about my friends at the beach. Still, I contined to work and I finally finished at 2 in the morning. >>Still, I continued to work and finally I finished the paper at 2 AM. I was tired, but very satisfied with myself for getting it done. >>Corret! But when I arrived at the class, I saw a sign on the door saying the class was cancelled for personal reasons. >>But when I arrived in my class, I looked at the sign on the door saying the class was cancelled due to personal reasons. I was so happy about it and decided to go enjoy surfing with my friends. >>Correct!

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