Go surfing
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I had a pleasant experience the other day. My friends suggested going surfing in the afternoon, but I couldn't go with them because I had to finish the history paper. Although I felt frstrated, I began to work right away at 4 p.m. It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about friends at the beach.Still, I contined to work and I finally finished at 2 in the morning. I was tired, but very satisfied with myself for getting it done.But when I arrived at the class, I saw a sign on the door saying the class was cancelled for personal reasons. I was so happy about it and decided to go enjoy surfing with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sophia,
Thanky ou for making a composition. I really appreciate it. So, how was surfing. Its good that you had some time off to enjoy your weekend. See you tomorrow!
Teacher Faye
Here are your corrections:
I had a pleasant experience the other day.
>>Correct!
My friends suggested going surfing in the afternoon, but I couldn\'t go with them because I had to finish the history paper.
>>Correct!
Although I felt frstrated, I began to work right away at 4 p.m.
>>I felt frustrated so I began to work right away at 4 PM.
It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about friends at the beach.
>> It was difficult to concentrate on my work, as I kept daydreaming about my friends at the beach.
Still, I contined to work and I finally finished at 2 in the morning.
>>Still, I continued to work and finally I finished the paper at 2 AM.
I was tired, but very satisfied with myself for getting it done.
>>Corret!
But when I arrived at the class, I saw a sign on the door saying the class was cancelled for personal reasons.
>>But when I arrived in my class, I looked at the sign on the door saying the class was cancelled due to personal reasons.
I was so happy about it and decided to go enjoy surfing with my friends.
>>Correct!
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