Go to church winter retreat.

2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

I will go to church tommorrow.It will be great.I can have a good time with there.Staying home is too boring.I will play a lot.And I will eat a lot too.I was looking forward to go to church winter retreat.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Wow! I\'m excited for you. ^^

I hope you\'ll have a great time there.

Take care and enjoy everything.

See you next week. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


I will go to church tommorrow.

>> I will go to church tomorrow.

It will be great.

>> correct

I can have a good time with there.

>> I can have a good time there.

Staying home is too boring.

>> correct

I will play a lot.And I will eat a lot too.

>> I will play a lot and  eat a lot too.

>> or: I will play and eat a lot.

I was looking forward to go to church winter retreat.

>> I am looking forward to go to church winter retreat.

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