Go to church winter retreat.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will go to church tommorrow.It will be great.I can have a good time with there.Staying home is too boring.I will play a lot.And I will eat a lot too.I was looking forward to go to church winter retreat.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! I\'m excited for you. ^^
I hope you\'ll have a great time there.
Take care and enjoy everything.
See you next week. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
I will go to church tommorrow.
>> I will go to church tomorrow.
It will be great.
>> correct
I can have a good time with there.
>> I can have a good time there.
Staying home is too boring.
>> correct
I will play a lot.And I will eat a lot too.
>> I will play a lot and eat a lot too.
>> or: I will play and eat a lot.
I was looking forward to go to church winter retreat.
>> I am looking forward to go to church winter retreat.
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