Go to school
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Today,I went to school.Winter vacation was ended.And after go to school for 6days there will be autumn vacation and new year's.And after vacation, I have to go second-grade class.
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Hi, [이름]!
I understand how you feel, but you really need to go to school.
Don\'t worry too much, you can still enjoy your winter vacation.^^
Enjoy your weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Today,I went to school.
>> Today, I went to school.
Winter vacation was ended.And after go to school for 6days there will be autumn vacation and new year\'s.
>> Our winter vacation is finished. After going to school for 6 days, our spring vacation starts and then we will celebrate the New Year.
And after vacation, I have to go second-grade class.
>> And after our spring vacation, I have to go to the second grade class.
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