Go to the movie
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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [Name]^^
Wow, you like going to the theater too!
I kinda envy the cinema in your country, yours is bigger.
I hope I could try to watch movies there someday (hehe)
Thanks for your hard work, you were able to construct good sentences. High-five!!!
When I go to the movies. I usually go to Megabox near my house.
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Megabox is a big multiplex cinema in korea.
>>Megabox is a big multiplex movie in Korea.
When I get into the theater, I can see a spacious hall first.
>>When you enter the theater, you can see the large spacious hall first.
The hall has a snack bar and a waiting area with a few tables and chairs.
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People buy popcorn and beverages at the snack bar before the movie starts.
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In the corner of the hall, there are movie leaflets and brochures, in the theater itself, there are 7 screens, and they show different films.
>>There are movie fliers and brochures in the corner of the hall, the theater itself has seven screens, and it shows other films.
Each has a big screen and accommodates roughly 200 people.
>>Each has a large screen and can roughly hold 200 people.
Personally, I prefer multiplex cinemas because of their modern and pleasant atmosphere.
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