Go to the movie

2019-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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When I go to the movies. I usually go to Megabox near my house. Megabox is a big multiplex cinema in korea. When I get into the theater, I can see a spacious hall first. The hall has a snack bar and a waiting area with a few tables and chairs. People buy popcorn and beverages at the snack bar before the movie starts. In the corner of the hall, there are movie leaflets and brochures, in the theater itself, there are 7 screens, and they show different films. Each has a big screen and accommodates roughly 200 people. Personally, I prefer multiplex cinemas because of their modern and pleasant atmosphere.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [Name]^^

Wow, you like going to the theater too!

I kinda envy the cinema in your country, yours is bigger.

I hope I could try to watch movies there someday (hehe)


Thanks for your hard work, you were able to construct good sentences. High-five!!!


When I go to the movies. I usually go to Megabox near my house.
>>CORRECT!
Megabox is a big multiplex cinema in korea.

>>Megabox is a big multiplex movie in Korea.

When I get into the theater, I can see a spacious hall first.

>>When you enter the theater, you can see the large spacious hall first.

The hall has a snack bar and a waiting area with a few tables and chairs.

>>CORRECT!

People buy popcorn and beverages at the snack bar before the movie starts.

>>CORRECT!

In the corner of the hall, there are movie leaflets and brochures, in the theater itself, there are 7 screens, and they show different films.

>>There are movie fliers and brochures in the corner of the hall, the theater itself has seven screens, and it shows other films.

Each has a big screen and accommodates roughly 200 people.

>>Each has a large screen and can roughly hold 200 people.
 Personally, I prefer multiplex cinemas because of their modern and pleasant atmosphere.

>>CORRECT!

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