goal
학생이 쓴 원문
goal.. alright
there are two things that i really wanna achive
that\'s getting OPIC IH score and getting a job
first of all, i\'ve been study English since last year, but i think i can\'t speak english very well
i think getting OPIC IH score is one of the most important challenges this year
becus i won\'t have a time to study english after getting a job so i think the only opportunity to study english hard is now
and second i really wanna get a job. you know unemployeement is getting higher becuse of economic depression so i very anxious
i really hope to get a job ASAP
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goal.. alright
there are two things that i really wanna achive
>>There are two things I really want to achieve.
that\'s getting OPIC IH score and getting a job
>>It is to get an OPIC IH score and get a job.
first of all, i\'ve been study English since last year, but i think i can\'t speak english very well
>>I\'ve been studying English since last year, but I don\'t think I\'m good at English.
i think getting OPIC IH score is one of the most important challenges this year
>>I think getting OPIC IH score is one of the most important challenge of the year.
becus i won\'t have a time to study english. after getting a job so i think the only opportunity to study english hard is now and second i really wanna get a job.
>>Since there will be no time to study English after getting a job, I think the only chance to study English now.
you know unemployeement is getting higher becuse of economic depression so i very anxious
>>I\'m very nervous because I know that the unemployment rate is rising due to the economic depression.
i really hope to get a job ASAP
>>I really hope to get a job ASAP.
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