goal
학생이 쓴 원문
when I set a goal it`s hard to do it consistently
There are things I`ve been doing for over a year.
Exercise, studying English...
I don`t work very hard I`m trying to break the habit of procrastinating.
I try not to make too big a plan and try to keep it steady.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]~ Thank you for doing your homework. You did great as usual. Keep up the good work and keep on improving. See you later~
-T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> When I set a goal, it\'s hard to achieve it with a constant work.
There are things I`ve been doing for over a year.
>> There are things that I\'ve been doing for over a year.
>> These include exercise, studying English, etc.
>> I don\'t work very hard but I\'m trying to break my habit of procrastinating.
>> I try to not make a big plan that is too big to handle. I will try to keep it small but steady.
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