Goal of life
학생이 쓴 원문
To acheive my dream is my viggest goal in life.
my dream is stage designer, because it\'s cool to see a people performing on stage.
and I think i have a goal is good.
because, I can effect for my goal.
강사 첨삭
Dear, [이름].
This is quite a surprise. Thank you so much for doing your homework. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on this topic. I hope we can have the chance to talk about it in one of our classes. Great work! Keep it up!^^
~ Teacher Jane c\",)
To acheive my dream is my viggest goal in life.
>>> To achieve my dream is my biggest goal in life.
my dream is stage designer, because it\'s cool to see a people performing on stage.
>>> My dream is to be a stage designer because it is cool to see people performing on stage.
and I think i have a goal is good. because, I can effect for my goal.
>>> And I think I have a good goal because it has a positive effect on me.
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