Goals
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a high school student, I wished to grow up as soon as possible and I wanted to wear a suit and shoes and go to work.
I achieved that goal already.
I also achieved my goal of taking English Toeic test in my 40s and i got a computer MS program in my 50s.
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Hi, Ms. [이름]!
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. When I was a high school student, I wished to grow up as soon as possible and I wanted to wear a suit and shoes and go to work.
>>When I was a high school student, I wished to grow up as soon as possible to wear a suit and shoes and go to work.
2. I achieved that goal already.
>>CORRECT!
3. I also achieved my goal of taking English Toeic test in my 40s and i got a computer MS program in my 50s.
>>I also achieved my goals of taking English TOEIC test in my 40s and getting a computer MS program in my 50s.
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