God's plan B

2015-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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In the bible, The prophet Samuel suffered a horrible disappointment in his relationship with the first king of Israel, a man named Saul. Samuel picked him out of the crowd and declared him to be the king of Israel. Samuel did his best to help saul be a king who was pleasing to God. Unfortunately, Saul refused to live in obedience to God, and God eventually rejected him as the king. Samuel must have been devastated and frustrated. Then, God asked him an important question "Samuel, how long are you going to mourn over Saul" God is asking us similar questions today. God always has another plan. Saul was God's first choice. But Saul didn't walk in obedience. But God choose David as the God's second plan. God knows we're going to make mistakes. God knows we are not perfect. So we have to believe that he provide fresh and new mercy and grace every day. We need to trust in God's Plan B and Plan C.

강사 첨삭

Good day Mr. [Name]! I hope that your day is okay today though you are quite busy today.
Anyway, I am always thankful that you share to me messages and lessons of encouragement.

And so thank you for sharing this great lesson today. Though we did not talk today, this one is already enough.

You take care Mr. [Name]!


Always grateful,

Kathrine ^^


In the bible, The prophet Samuel suffered a horrible disappointment in his relationship with the first king of Israel, a man named Saul.

>> correct!

Samuel picked him out of the crowd and declared him to be the king of Israel.

>> correct! 

Samuel did his best to help saul be a king who was pleasing to God.

>> Samuel did his best to help Saul be a king who is pleasing to God.
 Unfortunately, Saul refused to live in obedience to God, and God eventually rejected him as the king.

>> correct!  

Samuel must have been devastated and frustrated.

>> correct!   
 Then, God asked him an important question \"Samuel, how long are you going to mourn over Saul\" God is asking us similar questions today.
>>  Then, God asked him an important question \"Samuel, how long are you going to mourn over Saul?\" God is asking us the similar question today.
God always has another plan.

>> correct!    

Saul was God\'s first choice.

>> correct!   

But Saul didn\'t walk in obedience.

>> correct!   

But God choose David as the God\'s second plan. 

>> But God choose David as His second plan. 
 God knows we\'re going to make mistakes.

>> correct!    

God knows we are not perfect.

>> correct!    

So we have to believe that he provide fresh and new mercy and grace every day.
>> So we have to believe that He provides fresh and new mercy and grace every day.
 We need to trust in God\'s Plan B and Plan C.

>>   We need to trust God\'s Plan B or Plan C.

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