going camping

2010-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I went camping at friday and saturday. I went to bi-yeong-ji-bang auto camping yard. ( in korean 병지방 캠핑장) I arrived at friday night so there was no place to make our tent. Hopefully we found one place to make a tent. We made the tent and then we at supper. we ate pork and noddles. The pork was very very extremely delicious. It was fantastic. We made a campfire and I played using fire. It was fun.Then we slept The next day in the morning we ate kimchi-soup. Then we made a campfire again and I played using fire. I played in the water and catched some creatures. I don't know the name of those. After playing we at pork and sausage. Unfortunately, it rained after we ate afternoon meal.

강사 첨삭

Hey there! It’s good to know that you had a blast on your weekend. Well, it’s unfortunate that the rain came and put all the fun to a stop, but still, I think you really enjoyed the camp! Thanks for sharing me those experiences, do send them whenever you want to, I love to hear about them.   Kate   I went camping at friday and saturday. >>I went camping last Friday and Saturday. I went to bi-yeong-ji-bang auto camping yard. >>Correct I arrived at friday night so there was no place to make our tent. >>Correct Hopefully we found one place to make a tent. >>Fortunately, we were lucky to find one place to make a tent. We made the tent and then we at supper. we ate pork and noddles. >>Oops, spelling!  We made the tent and then we ate supper. we ate pork and noodles. The pork was very very extremely delicious. It was fantastic. >>Correct, though it was redundant. You could say it as 밫he pork was very/extremely delicious.?lt;o:p> We made a campfire and I played using fire. >> We made a campfire and I played with fire. It was fun.Then we slept>>CorrectThe next day in the morning we ate kimchi-soup. >>The next day, we ate kimchi soup. Then we made a campfire again and I played using fire. >> Then we made a campfire again and I played with fire. I played in the water and catched some creatures. I don't know the name of those. >> I played in the water and caught some creatures. I don't know the name of those. After playing we at pork and sausage. Unfortunately, it rained after we ate afternoon meal. >> After playing we ate pork and sausage. Unfortunately, it rained after we ate our afternoon meal.    

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