Going fishing

2018-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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I'm going to go fishing this Friday with co-workers. Catching a fish isn't easy. I think It takes patience and perseverance, when catching s fish.

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I\'m going to go fishing this Friday with co-workers.

>>  I\'m going  fishing this coming  Friday with my co-workers.
 Catching a fish isn\'t easy.

>> Correct!

>> OR: Catching fish isn\'t easy as it seems

 I think It takes patience and perseverance, when catching s fish.

>> I think it takes patience and perseverance, when you are catching a fish.



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