going school
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to go to school because of playing with my friend and make another friend.
I like playing with my friend because it is very exciting and playing is always funny.and second I like to make a friend but I\'m not good at it so, going school is a very good chance to make friend.
That\'s the reason why I like to go to school.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름].
>>> I like to go to school because of playing with my friends and making new friends.
I like playing with my friend because it is very exciting and playing is always funny.
>>> I like playing with my friend because it is very exciting and playing is always fun.
and second I like to make a friend but I\'m not good at it so, going school is a very good chance to make friend.
>>> Also, I like to make a new friend but I\'m not good at it so going to school is a very good chance to do that.
That\'s the reason why I like to go to school.
>>> correct
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