Going to Abroad
학생이 쓴 원문
On Monday,our school will have vacation.
I'm so excited.
We talked about what will we do on vacation.
I said, "I will go swimming on this vacation."
One of my friends said, "I will go to Japan."
All of my friends envied her.
She said she went to Jeju island last summer and it was very good.
She also ate really delicious seafood for every meal.
She said, "I wish I could travel every year."
I think so too.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for your composition. I really appreciate your effort in writing something for me to read even just once in a while. Well, I hope you\'ll have something good this summer break. You don\'t really have to envy your friend who\'s going to Japan. I\'m sure you can do interesting activities in your own country that will make you enjoy the vacation. Try something new and different. Take care and be happy!
T. JanE ^^
On Monday, our school will have vacation.>> Our summer vacation starts on Monday.
I\'m so excited.>> Correct
We talked about what will we do on vacation.>> We talked about what we will do during the vacation.
I said, \"I will go swimming on this vacation.\">> I said, \"I will go swimming this vacation.\"
One of my friends said, \"I will go to Japan.\">> Correct
All of my friends envied her.>> Correct
She said she went to Jeju island last summer and it was very good.>> Correct
She also ate really delicious seafood for every meal.>> Correct
She said, \"I wish I could travel every year.\">> Correct
I think so too.
>> I hope so, too.
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