Going to kindergarten before attending primary school.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s nessasary for children to be with their familly, but they also need the time to develop social skills and Learn rules through regular meeting peers. Therefore, I think it\'s very important for children to go to kindergarten before attending primary school.
강사 첨삭
Today is a fresh opportunity to keep striving, keep learning, and keep growing Ms. [Name]. It\'s the perfect time to push through and finish the week strong. Remember, progress is progress, no matter how small. Keep going, you\'re halfway there!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think it\'s necessary for children to be with their family, but they also need the time to develop social skills and learn rules through regular meeting with peers.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
Therefore, I think it\'s very important for children to go to kindergarten before attending primary school.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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