Gold&Diamond Teeth
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Theme: [ESSAY] Some people have gold inserts or diamonds in their teeth. What do you think of this custom?
I think it is not so good.
In my case, I had silver teeth after treat cavity.
But some people have gold or diamond teeth for show or as sign of wealth.
So I think it looks bad and not truth person.
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Hi there, Clair!
Here\'s your edited homework!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Some people have gold inserts or diamonds in their teeth. What do you think of this custom?
I think it is not so good.
>> or: If you ask me, this is not a good thing.
In my case, I had silver teeth after treat cavity.
>> In my case, I had a silver teeth after my cavity treatment.
But some people have gold or diamond teeth for show or as sign of wealth.
>> correct~~
So I think it looks bad and not truth person.
>> So I think it looks bad and doesn\'t really show the real person behind the all the glitters.
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