good afeternoon
학생이 쓴 원문
school is fun place to study and play with our friend.
I think every one hate school because we have to study a lot and It's too hard.
but I think school is better place In the word because we can get of early and
we can play with our friends and when we are study sometime we don't know
the question and we can ask to our friend to help us. I hope every one like to
going school.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear [이름]! ^.^
When I was still studying, I like going to school to play with my classmates and friends.
I also like going to school because I can study my favorite subject.
I know it\'s difficult and tiring to go to school, but I look forward to learning and playing.
I hope that you\'ll have more interest in going to school. ^^
_Teacher Dianne
school is fun place to study and play with our friend.
>> School is a fun place to study and to play with our friends. I think every one hate school because we have to study a lot and It\'s too hard. but I think school is better place In the word because we can get of early and we can play with our friends and when we are study sometime we don\'t know the question and we can ask to our friend to help us.
>> I think everyone hates going to school because we have to study a lot and it\'s too hard. I think school is the best place in the word because we can get up early and we can play with our friends or study with them especially when we don\'t know the question. We can ask our friends to help us answer the question.
I hope every one like togoing school.
>> I hope everyone likes going to school.
>> Or: I hope every student likes going to school.
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