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2010-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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i learned that Robert came from Egland and he learnd American pronunciation. he wanted became a rapper when he was fourteen. so he practiced some words. such as water, pasta, nacho and so on. those have differnce between Enland and America. and also Robert is very shy man. and Rober and Christine are love each other. Oprha asked about the love scandle to Christine. then Robert answered. Christine is pregnant. wow i was surprised to hear that. but very composurely Christine responded about the saying. Robert is very naughty guy. and he thought whenever he said like that joking everyone think it's funny. yes, it was joke. but the love scandle looked like real. ^ ^

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i learned that Robert came from Egland and he learned American pronunciation. >>I learned that Robert was from England and studied how to pronounce words using American accent. he wanted became a rapper when he was fourteen. >>he wanted to besome a rapper when he was fourteen. so he practiced some words. such as water, pasta, nacho and so on. >>correct^^ those have differnce between England and America.>>these words/terms are pronounced differently in England and America. and also Robert is very shy man. >>correct^^ and Rober and Christine are love each other. >>Robert and Kirsten are in love with each other. Oprha asked about the love scandle to Christine. >>Ophra asked Kirsten about their love scandal. then Robert answered. Christine is pregnant. >>correct^^ wow i was surprised to hear that. >>correct^^ but very composurely Christine responded about the saying.>>but Kirsten answered with composure. Robert is a very naughty guy. >>correct^^ and he thought whenever he tells joke, everyone will think it's funny.>>correct^^ yes, it was a joke. >>correct^^ but the love scandle looked like real.>>but the love scandal looks like it's real.  

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