Good afternoon,
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon! i am happy to see you and studing with you again.
It is a mail which i wrote in the office before, Please correct strange expression after reading.
First of all, we hope your company will be prosperous.
Our company is sorry to inform you that shipping schedule of OLGA1206N is delayed.
As regard the OLGA1206N, vessel of Olga is originally scheduled to be repaired by 30.Nov.2012 and we expected that OLGA1206N left from Pusan on 01.Dec.2012.
But, today ACC Korea was informed that Olga’s repair will be finished on 02.Dec.2012.
There is no free berth in the port on 03.Dec.2012, unfortunately, all freights will be loaded and leave from Pusan on 04.Dec.2012.
Finally, On board date in original document is noted on 04.Dec.2012.
Again, we apologize for your inconvenience and on your business.
It is a hard to express what i want to say in English because English expression is different from Korean's. Have a nice day and see you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
Your sentences are still very impressive. I\'m actually quite surprised with how you contructed your sentences. But make sure you capitalize the letter \"i\". I would suggest that you keep practicing your writing skills here. I\'d be more than happy to check your compositions. ^^
You know what, I\'m also very pleased to have you back again. It\'s always a joy to speak with you. See you tomorrow!
T. Aurora
Good afternoon!
>>Correct!
i am happy to see you and studing with you again.
>>I am happy to see you and to be studying with you again.It is a mail which i wrote in the office before,
>>This is a mail which I wrote in the office before.
Please correct strange expression after reading.>>Please correct the strange expressions after reading it.First of all, we hope your company will be prosperous.
>>Correct!Our company is sorry to inform you that shipping schedule of OLGA1206N is delayed.
>>Our company is sorry to inform you that shipping schedule for OLGA1206N is delayed.As regard the OLGA1206N, vessel of Olga is originally scheduled to be repaired by 30.Nov.2012 and we expected that OLGA1206N left from Pusan on 01.Dec.2012.
>>With regards to the OLGA1206N, the vessel for Olga is originally scheduled to be repaired by 30.Nov.2012 and we expected that OLGA1206N will be able to leave from Pusan on 01.Dec.2012.But, today ACC Korea was informed that Olga’s repair will be finished on 02.Dec.2012.
>>Correct!There is no free berth in the port on 03.Dec.2012, unfortunately, all freights will be loaded and leave from Pusan on 04.Dec.2012.
>>There is no free berth in the port on 03.Dec.2012 unfortunately and all freights will be loaded and will leave from Pusan on 04.Dec.2012.Finally, On board date in original document is noted on 04.Dec.2012.
>>Finally, the boarding date in the original document is noted on 04.Dec.2012.
Again, we apologize for your inconvenience and on your business.
>>Correct!It is a hard to express what i want to say in English because English expression is different from Korean\'s.
>>It is hard to express what I want to say in English because English expressions are different from Korean\'s.
Have a nice day and see you tomorrow!
>>Correct!
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