Good afternoon!
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Hello there! Thank you for being consistent in making your homeworks! I admire you for that. Today\'s homework is perfect. So, keep it up! If you have other questions, feel free to ask me in class! See you!
-Teacher Tina-
Happy Monday! Thank you for your good comment! It\'s always encouraging me.
>> Correct.
Teacher I have a question.
>> Correct.
which is the right word?
>> Correct.
\'students don\'t have a dream (until,by) getting into the university.
>> Students don\'t have a dream until they get into the university.
>> OR: Students don\'t have a dream until they go to the university.
And I hope you to correct this paragraph.
>> And I hope you\'ll correct my paragraph, too.
Students don\'t feel about gap between rich and poor.
>>
Students don\'t feel the gap between rich and poor.
I think, by wearing same cloth they can feel that they are united.
>> I think by wearing the same type of clothes they feel equal.
Also they don\'t have to be conscious about other people\'s eyes.
>> Also, they don\'t have to be conscious about the way other people look at them.
Nowadays many students want to wear clothes which are very expensive.
>> Correct.
It\'s pretty burden to poor students and also parents.
>>
It\'s a pretty burden to poor students and also to their parents.
Thank you! Have a nice day!
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
1. them
>> Correct.
2. her
>> Correct.
3. them
>> Correct.
4. him
>> Correct.
5. it
>> Correct.
6. her
>> Correct.
7. it
>> Correct.
8. them
>> Correct.
9. him
>> Correct.
10. us
>> Correct.
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