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2013-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Hello!! Good afternoon! Now Iam so tired that Iwant to take a nap. I don't want to study English today. but my think chageded it. because I had lunch with my co-worker but suddenly my boss joint us. He is a Italian so his pronunciation is very strong. I don't understand correctly what he is saying. So he asked me "Do you study Enlish?" I replied " everyday I do Phone Enlish and I study grammar because I want to talk with you" I was shocked it. I felt I had trouble to communicate with others. I do my best I can!! Thank you so much!! See you soon!! Have a good rest of day.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Well, that\'s a good attitude. You should really do the best that you can for you to improve on your English skills. .

It is good to know that you are trying to take control of the English language. But there are still some ways on how to be better in speaking it. 

So you ask, what is it that I need to do? What can I do on my own?

Here are my tips:
1. Read to Increase your Vocabulary
2. Using Radio to Listen to and Understand English Better

OR:
Firstly, buy a good English dictionary, for this is the most important thing that you will need when learning English.

Successful English learners use their dictionaries all the time. 

Secondly, if you want to improve your speaking/writing ability, read the newspaper, and while doing this highlight the words you do not know, and then go and check them in your new dictionary. 

Thirdly, instead of watching TV, listen to the radio.

Fourthly, talk, talk and talk to anyone anytime and anywhere. 

And finally, learn to go with the flow while enjoying the benefits of learning a new language; and even though, at times it may be frustrating and embarrassing to make mistakes, you will eventually learn to accept them, and only when you will focus more on understanding your mistakes rather than judging yourself,

then you will start to become fluent.

So, I\'ll see you later! Have a good day! :)

 Always,

T. Chloe ^^

 Hello!! Good afternoon!

>> CORRECT
Now Iam so tired that Iwant to take a nap.

>> Now, I am so tired that I want to take a nap. 
I don\'t want to study English today. but my think chageded it.
>> I don\'t want to study today but I changed my mind.

because I had lunch with my co-worker but suddenly my boss joint us.

>> Because I had lunch with my co-worker and suddenly our boss joined us. 
He is a Italian so his pronunciation is very strong.

>> He is Italian so his pronunciation is very strong. 
I don\'t understand correctly what he is saying.

>> I don\'t completely understand what he is saying. 

So he asked me \"Do you study Enlish?\" I replied \" everyday I do Phone Enlish and I study grammar because I want to talk with you\"

>> So he asked me, \"Do you study English?\". And I replied, \"Everyday, I have a class in Phone English and I study grammar because I want to talk with you.\"
I was shocked it.

>> He was shocked about it.

I felt I had trouble to communicate with others.

>> I feel I have troubles in communicating with others.
I do my best I can!!

>> I will do the best that I can!
Thank you so much!!

>> CORRECT

See you soon!!

>> CORRECT
Have a good rest of day.

>> Have a good day!

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