Good afternoon. ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon. ^^
I don't like monday.
I don't like monday. but I have to cheer up.
Here is my homework.
Q : Write about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision, and explain what you did.
A : My close friends were all married.
Also, they did early that. So their children were middle school students.
sometimes they go to overseas for sightseeing without me.
Before they go to overseas, ask me "Can you go to overseas with us?"
I always have to make a difficult decision.
I want to go there but I have to take care of my children.
I decide that I don't go there with my close friends.
Because I feel sorry to my family.
I envy them but my family is very important to me than my close friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you for making your homework! ^^
Your family is thankful for having a mother that\'s been there for them.
You have been there ever since to even now . It\'s worth more than words could ever describe.
That\'s one of the ways you\'ve been able to stay grounded is for your family.
A family means no one gets left behind or forgotten.
Love your family because they are the most important thing no matter what.
Take care always and have a great day ahead.
~~ Teacher Kris
My close friends were all married.
>> CorrectAlso, they did early that. So their children were middle school students.
>> They got married at an early age. So, their children are middle school students.sometimes they go to overseas for sightseeing without me.
>> Sometimes, they go overseas for sightseeing without me.Before they go to overseas, ask me \"Can you go to overseas with us?\"
>> Before they go to overseas, they first ask me, \"Can you come with us?\"I always have to make a difficult decision.
>> I always have difficult decision makings.I want to go there but I have to take care of my children.
>> Correct
>> OR: I want to go with them but I have to take care of my children.I decide that I don\'t go there with my close friends.
>> I decide not to go with them.Because I feel sorry to my family.
>> CorrectI envy them but my family is very important to me than my close friends.
>> I envy them but my family is more important than my close friends.
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