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Hi dear. I feel good because I took our class on time. I'm going to write tomorrow's topic. I know persons who live rooms 403,502. New married couple live in 403. When I met them the first time, I thought they looked like smart and capable. As l expected, they are the legal staffs. Neighbors who live in 502 are a lady and her son. Actually I haven't seen her son. When I met her, she looked unfriendly because she never smiled. In fact, she seems to have nervous nature so, my mon and her fought about a bit matter before. But now I know she has warm and tender heart. She cried and apologized for her fault and proposed doing exercise together. I wish all people who live in a villa get along well togather. Thank you for reading my composition. I will be waiting tomorrow 7:50am.

Hi my dear [이름],

           Thank you for this composition. I think it is really important to deal well with our neighbors. It will make us more relax to live in our neighborhood. Take care! See you in the class!

Venus

 

Hi dear, I feel good because I took our class on time.

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I'm going to write tomorrow's topic.

>> I'm going to write about tomorrow's topic.
I know persons who live rooms 403,502.

>> I know the people who live in rooms 403 and 502.
New married couple live in 403.

>> New married couples live in room 403.
When I met them the first time, I thought they looked like smart and capable.

>> When I met them, at first time, I thought they looked smart and capable.
As l expected, they are the legal staffs.

>> As l expected, they are legal staffs.
Neighbors who live in 502 are a lady and her son.

>>My neighbors who live in 502 are a lady and her son.
Actually I haven't seen her son.

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When I met her, she looked unfriendly because she never smiled.

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In fact, she seems to have nervous nature so, my mon and her fought about a bit matter before.

>> In fact, she seems to have short-tempered nature so, my mom and she fought about a small matter before.
But now I know she has warm and tender heart.

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She cried and apologized for her fault and proposed doing exercise together.

>> She cried and apologized for her fault and proposed that should do exercise together.
I wish all people who live in a villa get along well together.

>>Correct
Thank you for reading my composition.

>>Correct
I will be waiting tomorrow 7:50am.

>> I will be waiting tomorrow at 7:50am.