Good afternoon~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there baby! Wow! Time flies! 4 days just slipped away...
Now back to normal...waaaaaaaaahhh!!
But it\'s always great talking to you...
You always impress me and two thumbs up for a job well done...
Well, you could say that again...
I hope everyday is New Year! Hahah..Foooodddd!!!
Anyway, take care always and have a great day...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon~!,teacher
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Did you have a great holiday?
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Actully i had a great holiday ~!
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I went to my grand parents house
>>correct (grandparents\' house)
I met all of my family~!
>>I met all of my family members.
OR: I met my relatives.
They gave me a lot of New Year\'s cash gifts
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I can buy a cosmetic, and clothes
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OR: I can buy some cosmetics and clothes.
I am so happy~!
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Also i went to singing room with my family
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OR: I also went to the singing room (karaoke bar) with my family.
We had a really great time~!
>>We all had a great time!
I sang so much....
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So my voice sound really bad
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I watched tv too
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It was so much fun.
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We played bawling at my grandparents house
>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word BOWLING)
Actully my cousin also like bawling so we played together
>>Actually my cousin also likes bowling so we played together.
I hope everyday is a new years day~!
>>I hope everyday is New Year\'s day.
Then i can get a lot of money, also i can play with my family~!
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Anyway see you in the class~!:)
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