good afternoon joanna!
학생이 쓴 원문
how's the whether today?
today, it's rainy in jeju.
these day, i like to listen to classic.
especially, i like chopin because during elementary school, i learned piano.
and i like ditto who is a performing musician group.
i found that they will come to korea
and i will go their concert on my summer vacation!!
have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
A pleasant afternoon to you too!^^
Today is actually sunny here so I'm really happy.(^,^)
Music can really help you relax and make your mood better especially now that it's raining there in Jeju and you can't go out to enjoy.
Anyway, here are your corrections and thank you for sending your composition.
I'll talk to you soon!
Take care!^^
how's the whether today?>>How's the weather there today?today, it's rainy in jeju.>>It's raining today in Jeju.these day, i like to listen to classic.>>Today, I like to listen to classical music.especially, i like chopin because during elementary school, i learned piano.>>I especially like Chopin because when I was still in the elementary school I learned how to play his music in the piano.and i like ditto who is a performing musician group.>>I also like Ditto who is a performing musical group.i found that they will come to korea
>>I found out that they will have a tour here in Korea.and i will go their concert on my summer vacation!!>>I will go to their concert on my summer vacation!have a nice day!
>>Have a nice day!
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